Elevator Pitch No. 3
I appreciated all of the feedback I received from the elevator pitch No. 2 post. I was made aware of my tone and how I could sound more excited. I was surprised to see that my ending was unnecessary and that I should have ended my video sooner. I feel all of the feedback I received was true and meant to help me with this final elevator pitch.
I tried to be more enthusiastic with my delivery. I changed my ending statement to be more fitting. I also incorporated some dialogue about some features within my mobile application, ALike.
You explained what your app would be for very well. Your delivery was great and you were well understood. You can tell you are passionate about this and excited! Great Job!
ReplyDeleteHi Marcos, your elevator pitch came out great! I think you delivered your message well, and I agree with Jessica that you were very passionate. I think you succeeded at adding more enthusiasm to your delivery. All in all, your idea sounds great and I think you successfully described it concisely and enthusiastically!
ReplyDeleteYou pitch is great. It is well thought out and clearly understood, so that the average person could understand exactly what you are trying to do. Going after job hungry college student is a brilliant idea. Also telling a person how much you would like them to invest is good so they can say yes or no from the beginning.
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